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What's gone is mute, someone changed the truth (backdated)
Characters: Edward Elric, Maria Cyphert, anyone else!
Location: Three dreams, one after another.
Rating: PG-13 for angst, grimdark, probable language, Germans and angst.
Open/Closed/Finished: Open!
Summary: Time Compression laughs at reticence.
[Night 1]
Picturesque fields stretch as far as the eye can see, dyed a soft orange by the sun as it hangs lazily over the horizon. Nearby, a tree rustles in the crisp breeze, its shadow rippling across the dirt path beside it like light on water. There's no such thing as a perfect summer's evening, but by most people's standards, this would come close.
The two blond kids currently wandering down the path seem a little too preoccupied to bask in it, though.
"Water, 40 litres... um..."
Unnoticed, a red and black blur pelts after them, still a fair distance behind but rapidly gaining ground.
"Saltpetre?" prompts the other kid, without looking round; he's sticking his arm out to run his fingers over the top of the wall bordering the path as they walk, and it seems to have captured most of his attention.
"Saltpetre..." The first boy, whose hair is slightly darker and whose expression is considerably less focused, gives up after a few protracted seconds and hangs his head. "Sorry, brother."
His brother sighs. It's drawn-out and theatrical in a way that may or may not be familiar. "Come on, Al, can't you take this seriously?"
"I am taking it seriously!" Al says, sounding mildly aggrieved. "It's just hard to remember."
They continue to walk together, completely oblivious as the blur thunders right up to them, resolves itself into an uncannily similar-looking person, lunges viciously at the nearest kid's backpack -
- and meets thin air. Without fanfare or even the faintest suggestion of movement, neither of the younger boys are in front of him any more. They're quite a ways further along the path, their voices starting to fade out of earshot, and they've always been that far ahead.
Edward Elric is not most people. He is livid - audibly growling with frustration as he drags himself to his feet, in fact - but if anyone happens to have a decent view of his expression at this moment in time, that's not the only emotion they'll be able to see in it. Messed-up dream or not, like hell he's going to sit here and watch those two get away.
[Night 2]
On its own, there's nothing particularly suspicious about this villa. Sure, the opulence of the garden alone seems out of place compared to the atmosphere of the city visible just beyond its gates, never mind the architecture, but places like that exist everywhere. And the armed guards, well, they probably come with the package.
The young man crouching in the bushes, watching those guards so intently that he probably wouldn't hear anyone else approach him, let alone see? Not quite as fitting.
[Night 3]
Whoever designed this dream must have been running a little low on ideas by this stage. It's utterly empty - a vast, featureless expanse of yellowish-white in almost all directions.
There must be some form of solid ground here, though, because somebody's standing right in the middle of it, staring fixedly at nothing immediately obvious.
He's dressed almost entirely in black, which makes it difficult to tell from a distance exactly what the stain on the front of his shirt is. Something that's less difficult to discern is the fact that he really, really doesn't want to be here. It's written all over his face.
Location: Three dreams, one after another.
Rating: PG-13 for angst, grimdark, probable language, Germans and angst.
Open/Closed/Finished: Open!
Summary: Time Compression laughs at reticence.
[Night 1]
Picturesque fields stretch as far as the eye can see, dyed a soft orange by the sun as it hangs lazily over the horizon. Nearby, a tree rustles in the crisp breeze, its shadow rippling across the dirt path beside it like light on water. There's no such thing as a perfect summer's evening, but by most people's standards, this would come close.
The two blond kids currently wandering down the path seem a little too preoccupied to bask in it, though.
"Water, 40 litres... um..."
Unnoticed, a red and black blur pelts after them, still a fair distance behind but rapidly gaining ground.
"Saltpetre?" prompts the other kid, without looking round; he's sticking his arm out to run his fingers over the top of the wall bordering the path as they walk, and it seems to have captured most of his attention.
"Saltpetre..." The first boy, whose hair is slightly darker and whose expression is considerably less focused, gives up after a few protracted seconds and hangs his head. "Sorry, brother."
His brother sighs. It's drawn-out and theatrical in a way that may or may not be familiar. "Come on, Al, can't you take this seriously?"
"I am taking it seriously!" Al says, sounding mildly aggrieved. "It's just hard to remember."
They continue to walk together, completely oblivious as the blur thunders right up to them, resolves itself into an uncannily similar-looking person, lunges viciously at the nearest kid's backpack -
- and meets thin air. Without fanfare or even the faintest suggestion of movement, neither of the younger boys are in front of him any more. They're quite a ways further along the path, their voices starting to fade out of earshot, and they've always been that far ahead.
Edward Elric is not most people. He is livid - audibly growling with frustration as he drags himself to his feet, in fact - but if anyone happens to have a decent view of his expression at this moment in time, that's not the only emotion they'll be able to see in it. Messed-up dream or not, like hell he's going to sit here and watch those two get away.
[Night 2]
On its own, there's nothing particularly suspicious about this villa. Sure, the opulence of the garden alone seems out of place compared to the atmosphere of the city visible just beyond its gates, never mind the architecture, but places like that exist everywhere. And the armed guards, well, they probably come with the package.
The young man crouching in the bushes, watching those guards so intently that he probably wouldn't hear anyone else approach him, let alone see? Not quite as fitting.
[Night 3]
Whoever designed this dream must have been running a little low on ideas by this stage. It's utterly empty - a vast, featureless expanse of yellowish-white in almost all directions.
There must be some form of solid ground here, though, because somebody's standing right in the middle of it, staring fixedly at nothing immediately obvious.
He's dressed almost entirely in black, which makes it difficult to tell from a distance exactly what the stain on the front of his shirt is. Something that's less difficult to discern is the fact that he really, really doesn't want to be here. It's written all over his face.
Night 1
"Where...?"
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"Forget it," he said aloud, turning away. "It's a dream. She can't even see me." He felt a little bad, it was true - but he knew damn well what would make him feel worse if he let this chance, however miniscule, slip out of his grasp.
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"Doesn't that depend on whose dream it is?" she said, half-jumping, half-rolling to her feet.
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Ahead of them, the retreating backs of the two boys from earlier were already little more than dots.
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Then he took off again, coattails flying, kicking up dust in his wake. Even if she hadn't quite been conscious enough to see his earlier attempt at tackling the kid, his intentions were probably crystal clear.
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He slowed his pace just enough to deliver an appropriately annoyed glare without any danger of tripping - which also meant, for the first time, he got a good look at her. Nope, definitely nobody he could put a name to, and nothing else particularly interesting... well, apart from the weapon strapped to her back. Probably worth making a note of that; he never knew when he was next going to piss someone off.
"What? What is it? Don't tell me you're really gonna help. I don't even know you."
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She set aside the whole issue of 'helping' -- it was a dream. What could be helped?
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He hesitated mid-sentence and squinted up ahead. The sun seemed to have dipped pretty sharply while he wasn't paying attention, and the silhouettes of the two kids were almost indistinguishable from the shadows across the grass surrounding them. By now they'd veered off to the side of the path and were starting to make their way uphill.
An idle thought flitted through his head... but no, he was pretty sure that gunblades weren't actually projectile weapons. It wouldn't make this any easier.
"I'll... figure something out," he said, not glancing back at her this time, not letting her see his expression. "To get you out of here, I mean. Just hold on. Just until I stop him."
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Besides, she was curious what would happen. The dream seemed to be outracing him, and she didn't believe he'd be able to act in it.
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Inwardly, Ed sighed. Under ordinary circumstances, he wouldn't even have thought about backing down this soon - not when he was right, dammit! But these circumstances weren't ordinary, and... he was on a time limit. Maybe he still wasn't sure why the messed-up dreams were happening or how they worked, but that was something he knew with preternatural certainty.
"Okay, you win. Just cover me."
An overblown choice of words for chasing after a defenseless ten-year-old? Sure, but he wasn't staying still long enough for her to point it out.
Soon - almost too soon, considering how far away they'd appeared to be from the dirt path - the voices of the boys up ahead faded back into earshot.
"...not like it's gonna be forever, Al," the blonder of the two was saying airily. "Just until we figure out how to do it for her, too. I mean, what if we let her get her hopes up first, and in the end, we couldn't do it? She'd never forget."
Al looked uncertain. "But, brother..."
And then, as seamlessly as before, reality reconfigured itself. Now a few yards away, the first kid just grinned, completely unaware of the gloved fist sailing through the empty space where his head had been moments ago. "Al, she'll come around. She always does. You'll see."
Meanwhile, again caught off balance, the present-day Ed fell to his knees.
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Otherwise, why would be be trying so hard to beat up a child? In a dream? It made no logical sense unless stopping the dream before it reached that part was terribly important.
"Will stopping it really matter?"
She meant that question. It was only a dream; it couldn't change reality. But maybe it did matter a great deal even given that fact.
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But her question touched a nerve. "Why the hell wouldn't it matter?" he snarled, whipping round - only for his eyes to widen a little on noticing her hand. He hadn't felt it.
Less explosively, he pushed himself away from her and slumped back down, so that he was sitting rather than kneeling.
"...Didn't I already tell you?" He sounded like he'd calmed down, but it was clearly an effort. "This isn't a regular dream. If it was, I'd just have to stand by and watch. It wouldn't be real. Nobody can turn back time. But with this... maybe that isn't true any more. I don't know." He looked up. "And I know you don't either, so don't start with that.
"But that - that's why I gotta try. I'll get you out of here too, I promise. You'll see." Copying that kid's intonation wasn't intentional, but by the time he realised it, it was a little late to stop. Well, whatever - not like anyone else would notice. "Just... not yet, okay? Not while there's still a chance."
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Maria had her gunblades in this dream, after all, and she was prepared to take his statements at total face value. This was his dream and he knew the significance. If he said it mattered, then she would accept that and help.
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A few thoughts he'd been burying up until now flashed by in an instant. Would it make any difference if by some miracle this was a real second chance, and he didn't stop her from going overboard? There'd be a paradox either way, he thought, his right hand semi-voluntarily curling into another fist. And - even though he felt a little sick to his stomach just contemplating it, it wasn't necessarily untrue - he couldn't be completely sure he was alive, could he? But...
But his past wasn't the only one on trial here.
He shifted, and started to pull himself to his feet.
"Don't kill him," he said, uncharacteristically quiet. "Get his attention. Make him listen. I'll take over from there. But don't kill him." A vague memory of something from Garden flitted through his head. "Al doesn't deserve that."
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As he rose, she reached out to grab his hand and pull him to his feet with casual strength. "Let's go then," she said, beckoning him to lead the way.
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- the sky flickered for an instant, its deep orange dimmed into the foreboding grey of oncoming clouds, the grass thickened under their feet and the temperature of the air around them plummeted. If either of the younger boys was perturbed by the sudden changes, it was impossible to tell; both of them had vanished without a trace.
In the low light, the silhouette of the house up at the top of the hill suddenly seemed a lot less friendly - but that was nothing compared to how it looked a few seconds later when, without warning, its previously darkened doors and windows blazed brilliantly, vibrantly gold.
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Night one
"What...where is this?"
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"How did you get in here?"
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"I--I'm sorry, Ed. I guess if I just stick with you? Maybe I can help?" At the very least, chances were this might help her get to know him better. She watched the boys for a moment, figuring one of them must be the younger brother Ed has mentioned.
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He didn't immediately respond to her offer of help. What could she possibly help with? He knew what he wanted to do, but... he'd just tried it. Several times. If he couldn't manage to properly beat himself, even with all the practice he'd had, who would?
Ahead of them, the younger boys ambled along, rattling off chemical names and measurements as they went, both of them clearly bubbling with an enthusiasm that seemed a little out of place in the setting.
Ed watched them with narrowed eyes.
"You're wondering about them," he said eventually. It wasn't phrased as a question.
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"Well, I'm kind of curious. It seems like they are listing ingredients for something?" She wasn't entirely sure what, exactly, but she had a little idea on alchemy from what Ed taught her and what she had tried to read herself at the library, at least. "That's....you, right? And your younger brother."
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"Ha. Yeah, it's something all right. And not what he's expecting, that's for sure." He glared fixedly over at his younger self, who seemed to be sticking his tongue out in response to whatever his brother had just said. "Looks like they can't see you, either. That's too bad. Although if you want to give it a try..."
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Night 2
It probably helps that she's in the brush as well, so a few light hoof steps is all it takes to get close enough to him.
"There something about this place I should know about?"
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Now he does look to his side, and his suspicions are confirmed. Hooves, wings, the whole works... in the middle of a garden in Munich. This doesn't improve his composure. It's a good thing those guards are currently too far away to notice the slight rustling of the bush as he catches himself from falling over in surprise.
"You - you're from..." That's a place he wasn't expecting to think about ever again. Actually, right now, he's a little hazy on the details of how he left... but he must have done it, right? He's here. And has been for two whole years. There's absolutely no doubt about that.
He looks down for a second, pinches the bridge of his nose and tries again. "What're you doing here? Because I know you didn't come to bail me out." He sounds considerably more resigned than accusatory.
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Wherever this place is, it certainly isn't Garden and it sure as hell isn't Equestria. It's not exactly easy for a pony to stay hidden in a world full of humans, so if she had to stay hidden, it wouldn't be easy. Not that she hasn't been in similar situations, but that doesn't make them any less dangerous.
"So what, is this your world or something? It sure as hay isn't mine."
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The guards might not be the only reason he doesn't feel like making eye contact with her.
"I'd offer to help you out, but if I knew how to do that, I wouldn't be here." Although it sounds pretty general, his small half-shrug as he says it seems to indicate that it's true in the specific, too. "Nothing personal."
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She shrugs. If there isn't much he can do about it, then she'll have to find it on her own. Not that she minds; Daring is very much a solo adventurer. Something about this place doesn't sit right with her, though...
"It's alright; I'm used to working on my own...unless you need an extra pair of hooves or anything like that."
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Still, that's not a great reason to force anyone to stick around, so it's his turn to shrug. "I just need to get inside," he says, jerking his head towards the building. She might notice that one of the many ground-floor windows in that direction appears to have been smashed, with a hole in the centre not quite wide enough for at least a human to squeeze through. "If you want to tag along, I'm fine with that. If not, more power to you. But... I'll be honest with you; the guys with the guns over there probably wouldn't agree."
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She tips her hat as a smirk makes itself evident on her face. This is practically run of the mill for her. Looking over at the building, she notices the hole in the window. Daring wonders if he tried to force his way through prior to her arrival. She figured things wouldn't be as quiet if he did, but hey, that's probably what the guards are for.
"Besides, getting into places that want to keep everyone out is what I do best. We got a plan or we just making it up as we go along?"
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He lowers his head, and his voice drops even further.
"If you really want to know, I was gonna wait till nightfall. Figured at least their visibility would be worse then. No idea if it'll make enough of a difference. Just some old professor's house, my ass..."
Nope, there is definitely no way other than through the window that either of them are getting inside. None at all.
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Daring casts another look at the window. She's not really a fan of crawling through broken glass to get somewhere, but it's vaguely something she's done before. Maybe not exactly glass, but close enough.
"Let me guess: you want me to squeeze through that open it for you once I'm through?"
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"No, wait a minute," he says slowly. "Say you were carrying someone. Just... hypothetically. How fast do you think you could get up there? ...Without dropping them?"
It's too bad they are on Earth - he figures being able to make a decoy would come in really handy round about now. Then again, the guards' shadows across the lawn are lengthening, and the sky above them is already beginning to tint purple; they won't have much longer to wait.
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"From here to there? A few seconds if that someone holds on tight enough." She winks. Daring might not be as fast as Rainbow Dash, but she has more control (i.e. not nearly as many crash landings). Either way, she catches on to his line of thinking pretty quickly. "You're not too heavy, are you?"
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"Guess you'll find out when we try it," he says instead, and squints across the lawn again. "A few seconds, huh? So... if these jerks don't suddenly switch up the way they're patrolling, they'll pass behind that hedge over there. And in this light, or a little less..." Despite the tension of the situation, he can't help but grin a bit. "Bingo. What do you think? Sound like more of a plan?"
It's clear from the size of the hedge he's motioning his head towards that he might be using a slightly generous definition of "few"...
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She nods. "Sounds good. It won't be long before they're in position, so once that window opens up, we fly right on through it. Might wanna hop on now."
Daring readies herself for Ed to get on her back. If there's one thing the mare has a talent for, it's her reflexes. The aforementioned hedge wouldn't obstruct the guards' vision for long, but it'll be long enough for Daring to make it across without being spotted. Most likely. She's just watching them closely, waiting for her time to move...
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Anyway, fortunately, he has something more important to concentrate on as the guards continue to patrol and the shadows across the lawn lengthen.
The moment they set foot behind the hedge, he leans down and hisses, "Now!"
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hoofhandwaved for now, given the gravity of everything in the area that wasn't a colorful talking animal.Her reflexes are honed and the instant they set off behind the hedge, Daring springs forward with her wings outstretched and forcing down the air beneath them. Even with Ed on her back, she can still zoom through the air quick enough to briefly leave behind that grayscale rainbow she does when moving so quickly.
It fades quickly and before the guards can notice its existence. The instant they walk past that hedge and catch sight of Daring's and Ed's original location, the pegasus has already parked herself on the roof.
"Heh...there's no rush like a close call, am I right?"